We finally finished the video. Here is the final video, bloopers and behind the scene.
Final Video:
Behind The Scenes:
NGs:
Sunday, 12 May 2013
Final_The Headbandz Family (script & storyboard)
Script:
S- Shini
M- Mother (Sara)
D- Dad (pohchin)
G- Glenda (shini's friend)
L- Liwen (shini's friend )
Scene 1: Headbandz house(Shi Ni’s room)
M: -looks at ShiNi’s phone while she’s not around-
M: Shi Ni! Come here right now!
M: –saw shini- I told you to come here, right?
S: Sorry, I was peeing.
M: How could you do this?
S: What did I do?
M: Who is this? Is this your boyfriend? –shows pic-
S: Mom, that’s a girl.
M: I’m sorry. –change pic- Then who is this?-shows phone-
S: That’s… dad?
M: Don’t try lying to me.
S: I’m not lying . If you don’t believe me, that’s your own problem.
M: Cant’t you just tell the truth? Is it that hard? I mean, look at this. LOOK AT THIS!
S: I did say the truth. You just didn’t believe me.
M: what?
S: Nothing. –Snatches phone, slam door-
Scene 2 : Headbandz house (stairs)
M: DON’T BE RUDE! –chases with a cane-
S: -runs- Oh my god! Cane?
Scene 3: Corridor of headbandz house / Liwen’s house
S: Hello Glenda? Can we meet now?
G: Err, now?
S: yeah, can we meet now?
G: But I’m doing a project at liwen’s house now.
L: Who is that?
G: Shi Ni . Can she join us?
L: Sure.
G: Oh, yeah, you can come.
Scene 4: Liwen’s house (Living room)
S: -press doorbell-
S: Hello
L: Hi –Opens door-
L: What’s with that face?
G: Yeah, you look constipated.
S: I do? No, I don’t.
G: So, what happened?
S: I don’t know, my mum just look at my phone and say that I have a boyfriend when that was her own husband
G: -laughs-
S: I’m serious! Wait, maybe it’s because I have been talking on my phone too much these few days?
S: -looks around- Liwen, your parents are still overseas?
L: yup
S: Can I stay here for the time being? Since it’s the start of holiday tomorrow.
L: Sure. Glenda, you want to join along?
G: I wish I could.
L: Oh, that’s true.
L: Aren’t you going to tell your parents?
S: Am I supposed to tell my parents that I’m leaving home?
L: But still, …nevermind..
Scene 5 :Headbandz house
D: -enters room- Sara! Where’s Shi Ni?
M: I think she’s with her boyfriend..
D: Boyfriend? Since when did she have one?
M: Just now I look through her phone and I saw a picture of a guy doing this –shows action-
D: This? –does action- That looks familiar. Is it something like this? –does exactly the same as the pic-
M: Yahhh!
D: Really? Isn’t it me when I was younger? I think she has a photo like that in her phone right?
M: Really?
D: I think so.
M: I think I’ve misunderstood her then. I think I should call her now.
Scene 6: Liwen’s house
-SN’s phone rang. Mom calling-
L: It’s your mom! Answer it!
-SN ignores- -Liwen picks up, speaker mode on, pass to shini-
S: What do you want from me now?
M: I’m sorry about just now. I really did not know that that was your father. Where are you now?
S: I’m wandering around the streets, begging for money.
M: SERIOUSLY??
L: -snatches phone- Hello headband auntie! I’m ShiNi’s friend and she’s now staying at my home. I’ll bring her home tomorrow. –Shini stares at Liwen-
M: Alright! Thanks!
L: No problem! Bye!
Story Board:
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scene 1
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scene 2
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scene 3
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scene 4
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scene 5
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scene 6
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Story Boards
Draft 1:
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| scene 2 |
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Scene 3
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| scene 4 |
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| scene 5 |
Draft 2 (script's draft 2&3):
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| scene 1 |
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| scene 2 |
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| scene 3 |
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| scene 4 |
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| scene 5 |
Final:
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| scene 1 |
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| scene 2 |
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| scene 3 |
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| scene 4 |
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| scene 5 |
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| scene 6 |
Sorry!
Sorry ms Jumiah! Our storyboard will only be uploaded by 9 as we have not taken the picture of the final story board and our storyboard artist is busy now. Sorry about that!
Saturday, 11 May 2013
Scripts.
Draft 1:
Draft 2:
Draft 3:
Final:
S- Shini
M- Mother (Sara)
D- Dad (pohchin)
G- Glenda (shini's friend)
L- Liwen (shini's friend )
Scene 1: Headbandz house(Shi Ni’s room)
M: -looks at ShiNi’s phone while she’s not around-
M: Shi Ni! Come here right now!
M: –saw shini- I told you to come here, right?
S: Sorry, I was peeing.
M: How could you do this?
S: What did I do?
M: Who is this? Is this your boyfriend? –shows pic-
S: Mom, that’s a girl.
M: I’m sorry. –change pic- Then who is this?-shows phone-
S: That’s… dad?
M: Don’t try lying to me.
S: I’m not lying . If you don’t believe me, that’s your own problem.
M: Cant’t you just tell the truth? Is it that hard? I mean, look at this. LOOK AT THIS!
S: I did say the truth. You just didn’t believe me.
M: what?
S: Nothing. –Snatches phone, slam door-
Scene 2 : Headbandz house (stairs)
M: DON’T BE RUDE! –chases with a cane-
S: -runs- Oh my god! Cane?
Scene 3: Corridor of headbandz house / Liwen’s house
S: Hello Glenda? Can we meet now?
G: Err, now?
S: yeah, can we meet now?
G: But I’m doing a project at liwen’s house now.
L: Who is that?
G: Shi Ni . Can she join us?
L: Sure.
G: Oh, yeah, you can come.
Scene 4: Liwen’s house (Living room)
S: -press doorbell-
S: Hello
L: Hi –Opens door-
L: What’s with that face?
G: Yeah, you look constipated.
S: I do? No, I don’t.
G: So, what happened?
S: I don’t know, my mum just look at my phone and say that I have a boyfriend when that was her own husband
G: -laughs-
S: I’m serious! Wait, maybe it’s because I have been talking on my phone too much these few days?
S: -looks around- Liwen, your parents are still overseas?
L: yup
S: Can I stay here for the time being? Since it’s the start of holiday tomorrow.
L: Sure. Glenda, you want to join along?
G: I wish I could.
L: Oh, that’s true.
L: Aren’t you going to tell your parents?
S: Am I supposed to tell my parents that I’m leaving home?
L: But still, …nevermind..
Scene 5 :Headbandz house
D: -enters room- Sara! Where’s Shi Ni?
M: I think she’s with her boyfriend..
D: Boyfriend? Since when did she have one?
M: Just now I look through her phone and I saw a picture of a guy doing this –shows action-
D: This? –does action- That looks familiar. Is it something like this? –does exactly the same as the pic-
M: Yahhh!
D: Really? Isn’t it me when I was younger? I think she has a photo like that in her phone right?
M: Really?
D: I think so.
M: I think I’ve misunderstood her then. I think I should call her now.
Scene 6: Liwen’s house
-SN’s phone rang. Mom calling-
L: It’s your mom! Answer it!
-SN ignores- -Liwen picks up, speaker mode on, pass to shini-
S: What do you want from me now?
M: I’m sorry about just now. I really did not know that that was your father. Where are you now?
S: I’m wandering around the streets, begging for money.
M: SERIOUSLY??
L: -snatches phone- Hello headband auntie! I’m ShiNi’s friend and she’s now staying at my home. I’ll bring her home tomorrow. –Shini stares at Liwen-
M: Alright! Thanks!
L: No problem! Bye!
Thursday, 2 May 2013
Filming 1 & 2 (scene 1)
Today is the first time we tried filming for the video. We were not used to it at first and had many NGs but after that we got used to it managed to film the first scene.
While filming, we modified the script a little so that it would be easier to memorise and it will not be as un-natural.
*the storyline is still the same. Only the lines change.*
This is our first script's scene 1.
After editing the script,
Here's the finalised scene 1.
We did not have the time to do the rest of the scenes as it was already very late so the rest of the scenes would be taken some time later, probably after our geography midyear paper.
While filming, we modified the script a little so that it would be easier to memorise and it will not be as un-natural.
*the storyline is still the same. Only the lines change.*
This is our first script's scene 1.
The NG:
After editing the script,
Here's the finalised scene 1.
NGs:
Behind the scene:
Pictures taken: |
| Pohchin got changed to look more like a dad. we also decided to get cane involved in our video. |
Friday, 26 April 2013
Week 3 updates.
We showed Ms Jumiah our scene 1 video and she gave us some opinions to improve it. We did the new script during the discussion time given.
Here's the status report.
Here's the status report.
Tuesday, 23 April 2013
Saturday, 20 April 2013
Discussion -week 2
On friday, during our literature lesson, we did our story board, assignment of roles and the settings (place where we are going to be filming at for the video.)
This is the roles for the video:
Shi Ni as the main character,
Sara as the mother,
Pohchin as the father,
Glenda as friend 1, and
Liwen as friend 2.
The setting of the story is pohchin's house.
scene 1& 4: second level of his house; room
scene 2: corridor outside his house
scene 3& 5: first level of his house
We initially wanted to write another script on friendship, but since there is not much time left, we decided to stick to the script on family.
We will start filming somewhere next week.
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| group discussing |
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| Glenda, our stodyboard artist, drawing out our story board. |
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| Roles. |
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| progress table of week 4 discussion |
Friday, 19 April 2013
script. (draft 2)
We thought of changing the script as the previous one does not have much link to the story "notes from a liar and her dog". This script is based on the theme "family".
Brief storyline:
The main character was quarelling with her mom as her mom looked at her phone without her permission. She thought that her mom was not giving her any privacy by doing so. She went to her friend's house and asked if she could stay there for a while since her parents are away. On that night, her dad called and her friend helped her answer the call. Her mom apologised to her and ask her to go back home the next morning. Before she could even answer, her friend promised to make her go back home.
The main character was quarelling with her mom as her mom looked at her phone without her permission. She thought that her mom was not giving her any privacy by doing so. She went to her friend's house and asked if she could stay there for a while since her parents are away. On that night, her dad called and her friend helped her answer the call. Her mom apologised to her and ask her to go back home the next morning. Before she could even answer, her friend promised to make her go back home.
This is just a brief idea of the script. We may make some changes to it after tomorrow's discussion.
Thursday, 11 April 2013
In Discussion
Yesterday was the second day that we did the literature project. We tried hard to finish the storyline and managed to finish most of it. We discussed about the storyline but we thought about it for quite some time. I took some pictures when we were discussing.
Story board:
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| script in progress |
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| script draft 1 |
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| week 1 progress report |
Story board:
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| scene 1 |
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| scene 2 |
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| scene 4 |
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| scene 5 |
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